The photo that I was choose for this blog is not my
favourite, but it reminds me a great experience haha.
In this photo, I appear with my best friend in the police
car, after that police us was taken prisoners in our school.
The image was taken in 2014, the night before that the
Chilean soccer team will play their first match in the Brazilian World Cup.
I like this photo because spite the bad night that we pass
in the police station, we laugh all night and the friendship with my friend
became stronger.
We pass that night in the police station, and my mother went
to retired me of the station at the eleven of morning, she scolded me but not
punished me and when I was arrived on my home, the first thing that I did was
take a shower. After I was slept all afternoon, woke up when was playing Netherlands with Spain, altough I not remember the match because I still had dream and I continued resting.
¡Great experience!

The text is partially clear, it is coherent though at imes the conjugations or word choice may make the message a bit unclear.
ResponderEliminarCorrections:
I was choose = I chose
police us was taken prisoners = police took us prisioners
because spite the bad night= despite
We pass that = we passed
went to retired me= went to picke me up
T=3, L=2 G=1,5 = 6,5 pts
Grade: 5.0